Hỏi ngu: bác nào giúp em phần nội dung và ngữ pháp đoạn English này với

[thichlanhich]

Tình hình là mình có đoạn văn dịch lại từ nguồn khác. Các bác xem dùm mình có nội dung và ngữ pháp nó có hợp lý chưa.

Another study concerning however married individuals square measure healthier than singles? Well, yes. however that’s excellent news, right? particularly for all those that struggle to keep up a typically inconvenient affiliation in a very too-busy world that hardly values fidelity. the newest analysis, from a paper conferred at the yank school of Cardiology's 63rd Annual Scientific Session, finds those who square measure married have lower rates of many vessel diseases compared with those that square measure single, divorced, or widowed.

“These findings actually should not drive individuals to urge married,” said Dr. Carlos L. Alviar, medical specialty fellow, ny University Langone middle, “but it is important to grasp that selections relating to United Nations agency one is with, why, and why not might have vital implications for tube health.”


Phần quà tinh thần cho sự giúp đỡ này là: 10+ rep và nick có màu cho ai giúp được mình.

 

[Hido86]

Tình hình là mình có đoạn văn dịch lại từ nguồn khác. Các bác xem dùm mình có nội dung và ngữ pháp nó có hợp lý chưa.

Another study concerning however married individuals square measure healthier than singles? Well, yes. however that’s excellent news, right? particularly for all those that struggle to keep up a typically inconvenient affiliation in a very too-busy world that hardly values fidelity. the newest analysis, from a paper conferred at the yank school of Cardiology's 63rd Annual Scientific Session, finds those who square measure married have lower rates of many vessel diseases compared with those that square measure single, divorced, or widowed.

“These findings actually should not drive individuals to urge married,” said Dr. Carlos L. Alviar, medical specialty fellow, ny University Langone middle, “but it is important to grasp that selections relating to United Nations agency one is with, why, and why not might have vital implications for tube health.”


Phần quà tinh thần cho sự giúp đỡ này là: 10+ rep và nick có màu cho ai giúp được mình.

Theo minh thay thi vay la khá ổn roi, no problems

 

[Bienman]

Tình hình là mình có đoạn văn dịch lại từ nguồn khác. Các bác xem dùm mình có nội dung và ngữ pháp nó có hợp lý chưa.

Another study concerning however married individuals square measure healthier than singles? Well, yes. however that’s excellent news, right? particularly for all those that struggle to keep up a typically inconvenient affiliation in a very too-busy world that hardly values fidelity. the newest analysis, from a paper conferred at the yank school of Cardiology's 63rd Annual Scientific Session, finds those who square measure married have lower rates of many vessel diseases compared with those that square measure single, divorced, or widowed.

“These findings actually should not drive individuals to urge married,” said Dr. Carlos L. Alviar, medical specialty fellow, ny University Langone middle, “but it is important to grasp that selections relating to United Nations agency one is with, why, and why not might have vital implications for tube health.”


Phần quà tinh thần cho sự giúp đỡ này là: 10+ rep và nick có màu cho ai giúp được mình.

Có 1 lổi ở đây là chổ "ny University Langone middle", phai viet la "NY University Langone Medical Center" vì đây là trường đại học y khoa Langone tại New York(NY)

 

[thichlanhich]

cảm ơn, gắn cho 2 bác 2 cái VIP

 

[Jimmy]

Chữ “ the newest analysis…..” viết hoa bạn nha. Cấu trúc câu này ổn không có vấn đề gì.